Here is a mermaid tail story sent in to us from Bryn K. M.
We think it’s pretty fun and creative! Thanks, Bryn!
“Once upon a time in an ocean big and wide, there was a girl named Amelia. Amelia had dark brown wavy hair and a smile that brightened the day more than the sun did. She sighed, for she longed to be a mermaid. She heard her mother call, “Dinner!” Amelia rushed inside. She took off her yellow flip-flops and sat down at the table. Amelia gasped as she looked at her mother. Her mother was holding a thin rectangular box. Amelia got her scissors and carefully cut open the box as she chanted, “thank you, thank you, thank you!” repeatedly to her mother. Amelia smiled and gasped as she took out a small light-blue fabric bag.
She heard her mother call, “Dinner!” Amelia rushed inside. She took off her yellow flip-flops and sat down at the table. Amelia gasped as she looked at her mother. Her mother was holding a thin rectangular box. Amelia got her scissors and carefully cut open the box as she chanted, “thank you, thank you, thank you!” repeatedly to her mother. Amelia smiled and gasped as she took out a small, light blue fabric bag.
Inside the bag was a soft, green, scale-covered mermaid tail. Amelia opened the bag and quickly took out the tail. She gasped at the tail’s beauty. It had smooth, dark green scales that seemed to shine. The fin that connected to the bottom of the tail had no scales and sparkled. Amelia looked back into the rectangular box, and inside was a long monofin! She hugged and thanked her mother before Amelia ran to the beach. She put on her tail, then her monofin, and then she put the monofin in the fin. Amelia then rushed into the water. Amelia had officially become a Fin Fun Mermaid!”
About the Author: “I bought a Fin Fun Mermaid Tail and I loved it! I got the Gold-Scale-Mermaid-Tail! I am hoping to soon get the pink tail in the new line of mermaid fins called Mermaidens! The tail that I desire that is the pink tail is called Waverlee’s Malibu Pink Mermaid Tail! It is so beautiful! But, all of them are beautiful! I really recommend them all! They are all beautiful for all sizes! They have one for girls and boys and every age you can imagine! Yes, they do have tails for toddlers! The tails for the toddlers are very safe for swimming in! They have an opening on the bottom to the toddlers can kick and swim freely! I really like Fin Fun Mermaid because the tails are high quality, safe, beautiful! The reason I chose the green fin for this story is because it reminds me of Ariel from The Little Mermaid and if you didn’t notice, it is named “Brynn’s Celtic Green Mermaid Tail”! Although my named is spelled B-R-Y-N not B-R-Y-N-N, it still is pronounced the same and it is gorgeous! Well, anyways, I will see you soon my fellow mermaid friends! Bye!”
Jan 28, 2018 at 7:34 am
wow great story now i will always belive in mermaids
Jun 10, 2017 at 8:21 am
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Mar 11, 2017 at 2:10 am
i bet that was fintastic
Mar 10, 2017 at 7:40 pm
im already wrighting a story it involves 2 girls that dont seem to get along and the mermaidins but ill try and send it to you if i can when i finish it
Feb 19, 2017 at 10:32 am
HI! How do you send the story”s? I want to but let just say I don’t want anyone to “Steal my idea”. Thanks, fin fun!
Aug 8, 2016 at 9:02 am
I need a tail
Sep 22, 2017 at 4:21 pm
then ask your parents to buy one ! i would recommend jias crystals or zoeys
Jun 13, 2016 at 4:00 am
Hey! I’ve read this story and the other and I think they’re both really good. I’m now totally inspired to write my own and I will be sending it in, yay! 😀
Feb 22, 2016 at 8:35 pm
Amelia is so lucky and my Aussie green mermaid tail is so fun I’m sure that Amelia is probably older now but she can still have a chance to be an amazing mermaid
Sep 22, 2017 at 4:19 pm
i agree but i have the crystal blue tail instead of aussie green
Feb 22, 2016 at 8:33 pm
I will call myself a mermaid because I am getting one I can wait but the story was amazing
Jul 20, 2015 at 11:01 pm
Amelia is so lucky i have always wanted an aussie green fin fun mermaid tail size 8 mono fin jr and matching bikini set well anyway I better get going my mom’s calling me for dinner Bye 1 day i will get a fin fun mermaid tail